Flat Plan Feedback

From my feedback I get the impression that my front cover might be too cluttered. Although that is one of the convention of a pop magazine, I may have cluttered it too much because of this I will take some parts away to look less cluttered and more readable for my audience. My content page seem to have the most positive feedback. They found it easy to read and they like the structure of the page. My double spread sheet page feels like two separate which isn't I want. Although I used the lines to try connect them. To make it look like its together i will make the line more bold. I also agree that my model could be bigger which is why I think I should have a mid-shot. I'm also thinking about changing the props to relates it more e.g having a YouTube pillow